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05-05-2012, 01:17 AM
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Cold whispers slip into my ears
Telling me things I never wanted to hear
Brush off my shoulder and turn to my rear
Walk away ignorant and happy.. shedding no tears

Fingers pointing and making their claims
No judgement for me, nothing to blame
Attachments I've lost with the aging of time
Nothing holding me back, nothing making me blind

Envious stares watching with condemnation in mind
Unable to grasp what's in me that they too hold inside
To make inferior is their intention, but to no surprise
The emptiness remains, still nowhere to hide

Harsh steps forward as they walk with the herd
No point or direction as long as they are secure
Unintentionally broken, they fixed themselves up that way
A spin of the clock with no hands and no face



 
 
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05-05-2012, 08:14 AM
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The last line was quite perfect imo.

Good stuff.



If you win, you need not have to explain... If you lose, you should not be there to explain! ~ Albert Hitler
 
 
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Nice one kenny! I love it. I read it right through like a rap lol.

One thing about the message though... I feel like we look often at the faults of others to confirm our own accomplishments. Since we fixed part of something in ourselves we notice it in others and condemn them as well. Almost like we're failing each other as fellow humans...




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05-17-2012, 08:36 PM
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I like this. Like you recognize that sometimes it can feel like going your own way makes you too different to fit in. More people should realize that it doesn't matter if your friends like other things than you, you can still like those things.




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